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| Today for writing we did a thing called ''When I headed to school''it is basically a poem full of similes but we are making up what we say here is mine! |
Kia ora, I am a student at Belfast School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am Year 6 and Miss Wilkinson is my teacher. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share and Grow.
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| Today for writing we did a thing called ''When I headed to school''it is basically a poem full of similes but we are making up what we say here is mine! |
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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ReplyDeleteHey Isabella it me Disaree from Waikowhai Primary School. I was taking a look at your blog. You have done a fantastic poem. I'm sure who ever reads at you blog would be satisfied with your work. I'm sure you haven't lifted up a house before. I would love if you would take a look a my blog http://wpsdisareet.blogspot.com/. Bye have a amazing day Isabella.
ReplyDeleteGreat simile poem Bells. I agree that sometimes your bag is as heavy as a house! :)
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